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Fragile Dreams by Alexandru1988 Fragile Dreams by Alexandru1988
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:bulletred: A fragile wreck on a storm of emotion.

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Note - After reading over my critique it sounds overly harsh, I would like to point out that I DO like this image, and have even taken similar ones myself at times, however as a piece of artwork, it does lack a certain je ne sais quoi.


Vision - "A fragile wreck on a storm of emotion." I can see what you are thinking of with this image, but as the needles and the drops are the prominent features, that it doesn't quite match your statement.

Originality - Not a very original subject, and interesting one, but there doesn't seem to be anything in this image that hasn't been done before.

Technique - The depth of field (DOF) is only just apparent in this image in a very few places, it would have been nicer if the DOF was a little further into the image to focus on the webs a little better.
Also, I was taught by another DA member that a photograph should be framed regardless of whether it is printed or on the internet to show the viewer that it is finished. It can be anything from a simple 1 pixel white border to a complicated three coloured border.


Impact - This is a lovely image, but I feel like it is a little oversaturated which makes it blend, not have a great impact.
What do you think?
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H-G-K Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This one's very nice!
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LCVII Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student General Artist
So fragile but so strong. Makes it so beautiful :)
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Alexandru1988 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :)
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AraujaPhoto Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful :) *
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:iconalexandru1988:
Alexandru1988 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :)
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Yazzi Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Just incredible!
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:iconalexandru1988:
Alexandru1988 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :)
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crazygardener Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Cool!!
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:iconalexandru1988:
Alexandru1988 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :)
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crazygardener Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
your so welcome
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jesusfreak4 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
more like fragile life :)
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Alexandru1988 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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