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I am the passenger and I ride and I ride I ride through the city's backsides I see the stars come out of the sky Yeah, the bright and hollow sky You know it looks so good tonight Iggy Pop - The Passanger
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I am a big fan of fog, as long as I'm not experiencing it in a vehicle.Nice photo!
Some suggestions:
1.Square is too balanced,crop out the top, especially the bald sky.when that distraction is removed the eye is less drawn to the lower right hand corner.
2.set levels, especially on the right to emphasize the differences between the two sides of the road.
3.If you don't object to the technique, you might wish to clone out some distracting detritus in the landscape, particularly the black stuff on the foreground.
Do you have any alternate takes of this shot? Is this most of the original image or a crop?
This is so pretty. The fog is so mysterious however I think that maybe the amount of sky detracts from the photo because of the contrast between the white of the sky and the grey of the fog
Some suggestions:
1.Square is too balanced,crop out the top, especially the bald sky.when that distraction is removed the eye is less drawn to the lower right hand corner.
2.set levels, especially on the right to emphasize the differences between the two sides of the road.
3.If you don't object to the technique, you might wish to clone out some distracting detritus in the landscape, particularly the black stuff on the foreground.
Do you have any alternate takes of this shot?
Is this most of the original image or a crop?
Hope this is what you were looking for.
Jon Pike
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